Talk:Luna (Feid and ATL Jacob song)

GA Review

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Nominator: Pollosito (talk · contribs) 22:12, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will crack on with this one right away! --K. Peake 07:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• WP:OVERLINK of Fred under songwriters and ATL Jacob under producers
• "on December 1, 2023 through" → "on December 1, 2023, through" plus this should be the sentence directly before the composition instead
• "but later sent the track to" → "until later being sent to"
• "It is the second song on which Villada collaborates with an American hip hop producer after "Le Pido a Dios" with DJ Premier, so it was" → "The second song on which Villada collaborates with an American hip hop producer after "Le Pido a Dios" with DJ Premier, it was" and make this the sentence directly after the writers/producers
• I think it is worth noting how many countries it further reached the top 10 in and the certifications, in a separate sentence
• "An accompanying music video, directed by Sebastián Sánchez and released on March 6, 2024" → "An accompanying music video, directed by Sebastián Sánchez and released on March 6, 2024," with the wikilink
• I think the synopsis summary here can be cut off after him going back in time

Background and critical reception

• Are you sure this shouldn't be titled Background and composition?
• The opening sentence reads weirdly and should say in the order that he released his first EP Sixdo as a surprise release through Universal Music Latino
• Remove overly obvious wikilink on studio album
• "he announced on" → "Villada announced on"
• "surprise release and sharing that" → "surprise release and sharing,"
• Audio sample looks good!
• "through the window."" → "through the window"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "It was" → "The song was"
• Remove wikilink on Italy
• "go with another person."" → "go with another person"."
• "to the global level."" → "to the global level"." and add "The staff of" before the publication

Commercial performance

• Img looks good!
• Swap this with music video for the correct order
• "received a 3x Platinum" → "received a triple platinum" and mention how many units signified by this in the country
• "despite a decrease of 8%" → "despite a decrease of 6%" per the source
• Write quadruple platinum instead and mention this was in the US
• "outside the United States compared" → "outside the US compared" per MOS:US
• "the song climbed three spots to" → "the song had climbed to" since this is two weeks, not one
• Mention both the artists it was the first top five for

Music video

• Merge with the below section and retitle to Music video and promotion
• "this song so far, we made" → "this song so far. We made" per the source
• InfoBae should not be italicized
• "resonance among viewers."" → "resonance among viewers"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "shoot her partner starring Villada" what does this mean?

Live performances and covers

• Make this the second para of the above section
• Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music
• Pipe Lollapalooza Argentina to Lollapalooza

Accolades

• Per the Best Urban Song being written out in the lead, you need to add a mention of it in prose here – I would suggest a para summarizing these awards
• Refs should be centered

Credits and personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

Weekly charts

• Pipe FONOTICA to Asociación Costarricense de la Industria Fonográfica y Afines

Monthly charts

• Good

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 27.0%!!!
• Regarding MOS:CAPS issues, only remove capitalization on any refs where it is not part of the stylization of the artist or musical work name
• Cite Los 40 as publisher instead on refs 1 and 44
• Add Rolling Stone on ref 3 with the wikilink
• Pipe Vogue México to Vogue México y Latinoamérica on ref 4
• Cite Radio Programas del Perú as publisher instead on ref 5
• Wikilink El Colombiano on ref 8
• Pipe Universal Music Latino to Universal Music Latin Entertainment on ref 12
• Pipe Rolling Stone en Español to Rolling Stone on ref 13
• Pipe FONOTICA to Asociación Costarricense de la Industria Fonográfica y Afines on ref 18
• Cite Infobae as publisher instead on refs 37 and 40
• Wikilink YouTube on ref 39
• Cite AStv Colombia as publisher instead on ref 41

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; I'll be able to get back on it even if you are done later today! --K. Peake 08:44, 10 June 2024 (UTC)