Talk:Mary Paxton Keeley
Mary Paxton Keeley is currently a Magazines and print journalism good article nominee. Nominated by Sammielh (talk) at 21:37, 13 January 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article. Short description: American journalist (1886–1986) |
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Nominator: Sammielh (talk · contribs) 21:37, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Reppop (talk · contribs) 01:02, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello. I will be doing this review. This article has been on my radar for a while now as I was using it for an informal practice of GA reviewing, so I though it would be time to do an actual review. I plan to do some of it today and the rest throughout the week. Forgive me for any hiccups. reppoptalk 01:02, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Will be taking a break from this to rest, will get back to this tomorrow. reppoptalk 05:54, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Overall, prose is clear and concise, with only some things that I found to be off:
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Don't see any issues with MoS; lead and body sections look good, don't see any words to watch (that isn't a quote), fiction and list incorporation not in article. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | References are listed by order of appearance, sources are listed by order of surnames, both with appropriate information given. | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | I'll check some of the references and some of the sources separately.
Overall, I think most are good, I would just need a check on [88] to see if there's actually something that points to her letters and D.C. I've done some minor copy editing stuff on there as well. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | Don't see any major problems with original research. | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Earwig copyvio check turns up with no copyright violations. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Article addresses main topics as dictated by the headers (and somewhat by the lead as well). | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Maintains summary style throughout the article. | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Article is largely neutral, although there are some things I noticed:
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Hasn't been edited since May 10, mostly been edited by nominator. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | Some of the images' licenses are a little dubious, as they have a {{PD-because}} "SHSMO says there are no known copyright restrictions" but some have varying copyright descriptions, including in copyright with the rights-holder unlocatable and copyright undetermined. Specifically these ones:
I would suggest finding out if they're published and changing the licenses to other specific licenses. I can definitely help with this if you need. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | All images seem to be relevant to both the topic and their sections. | |
7. Overall assessment. | I am going to place this on hold for a bit so that you can return and see the comments and address them. Otherwise, the article is very good. |
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